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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

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PostSubject: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 9:46 am

Basic Information
Name: Zane flare

Age: 19

Looks:(Zanes application (Anbu) Lightningcopy)

Gender:(Male)

Village:(cloud)

Ninja Rank:(Anbu)

Clan: Flare

Personality: Zane is a nice boy who loves to fight and he seem like a wind person. Zane likes to have fun and fight and he likes to fool people and okay pranks on them. Zane is very nice he does not get mad at people and he likes to here people laugh when he makes a joke. Zane has a dark side but he never gets to bad he is still relatively nice all the time. He is very likable and has many friends. He likes to sped almost all his time outside but he is very quiet but is a jerk sometimes but nothing to extreme

Fighting info

Special Characteristics:(4 tales if open)

Element(s):(Lightning wind )

Skills/Specialties: (Nin,Kin)

Jutsus:(Name: Weapon death
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description: A weapon that Zane is using he can make it invisible when he lets go of it but the opponent can originally see the weapon. This jutsu is easy to do and you can do it with one hand and it happens so fast you can barely see it. Zane uses this jutsu to attack a opponent easier and even kill them in one hit.

Name: Death arrow
Rank:A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element:___
Description: A arrow Zane shoots he fuses with deadly chakra and if this arrow hits you it will slowly kill you bit by bit and you will die in about 1 minute. This arrow travels at a more slow speed but this is easy to detect that it is killing you because it starts to turn your skin black then all your blood gets poisoned and you die


Name: Hell shower
Rank:S
Element: wind
Type: Nin
Description: this makes many wind spiked fly around in the air then and of them come crashing down invisible of course but this jutsu is almost impossibly to escape because the only trace that it is coming is your vision will get blurry and this jutsu will almost 100% kill the opponent. But this jutsu takes a-lot out of Zane he sometimes falls unconscious from it. But that only happens rarely


Name Wind arrow
Rank B
Type Nin
Element wind
Description allows Zane to control a arrow in the air by changing the air around it and even making it speed up. but mainly to he can control it in mid air. by changing the currents around it making it turn or speed up this is a good combo with about anything because you can make sure the arrow hits.


Name:lightning hell
Rank:A
Element:lightning
Description: puts user in a genjutsu where they are attacked by 34 wolves and struck by lightning while I attack there body
and the only way you can get out of it is by killing all 34 wolves


Name:lightning dome
Rank: A
Element: lightning
Description: makes a dome of lightning around my opponent and is almost impossible to break that slowly closes in but you have ti break zanes concentration and the dome will disappear. is closes in at a speed 1 post than it goes down a little


Name: swords death
Rank: C
Element:___
Description: A sword that Zane is holding grows twice the size but not weight

Name Wind spear
Rank C
Type wind
Description shoots a blast of wind that will pierces about anything but just go through only about a inch. this is invisible because it is wind.


Name Wind spiral
Rank B
Element wind
Description creates a wind spiral blocking a attack by spinning wind around a attack until the attack is no more but this jutsu can be used as many times in a topic as the user wants. This is used against anything but lightning lightning will destroy it


Name death spikes
Rank B
Element ____
Description lays pikes on the ground that if you opponent steps on then not only will it hurt it will explode then more will appear out of exploding spikes and that will happen 5 times. these are made out metal but this metal is strange because it is flammable and they have gunpowder inside of them witch makes it blow up

Name wind death
Rank B
Element wind
DescriptionMake a sharp blast of wind pierce through anything and go towards the opponent invisibe but you can hear this coming at you it makes a faint whistle but if you get hit by this it will go through you but the whistle gets loud and this could confuse some people easly.


NameWind step
RankA
[b]Element Wind
DescriptionCan make Zane faster and you can even see this wind pushing him along at great speed but this wind will also let him fly up in the air but this jutsu will only stay as long as Reya is focused.

Name: Hell weapon fire
Rank: A
Element: ___
Description: with any weapon that Zane is holding he can then make multiple copies of that weapon shooting out of the original usually around 5-10 replicas of it shooting at the opponent




History

History/Background Story:(Zane was born a only child in the leaf village but his parents left him to go to the sand village. Naku then was raised up in Konoha alone and no one to lead him through life and show him right and wrong. Zane entered the ninja academy and raised through the ranks quickly and he became jounin at age 15. Because his power then his parents came back to find him but when they finally did Zane turned them away.


Zane spent his free time around the leaf and on the outer walls of it having a good time and he love feeling the wind against his face and he traveled out of the village allot. But one day he ran in to a missing nin that was about to invade the leaf so Zane then tried to stop him but strangely he put up a amazing fight but Zane managed to get out alive by tricking they opponent in to a paper bomb field. When the hokage heard about this he made Naku a Anbu expecting greater things from him because this missing used to be a Akatsuki. Zane was astonished that he was in anbu but he liked this.


He then trained harder but he found himself liking this more because he was more in control and he learned some more jutsus and became more powerful. But he also became more lonely because some people where scared to talk to him he did not know why but he soon was just as happy and then he was back in his mind and he was in a good place in his head and he was more looked up to but he still did not mind it he liked it but he did not not like it.


Zane was in anbu until he was 19 years old and he was the youngest anbu so far but even in anbu he felt like he needed something more he did not know what but then the other anbu started seeing him as more powerful and some of them even admire his power. Naku had no memory of his old clan because it seemed to be erased from his memory but he was very grateful for the power of his clan)


Last edited by Zane Flare on Sat May 02, 2009 3:22 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Akuma
Meikage
Meikage
Akuma


Number of posts : 879
Age : 28
Location : Michigan
Registration date : 2008-08-31

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

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PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 2:12 pm

You have to fill it in
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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 2:33 pm

well yeah Im not stupid you know I had 11 websites
Im just filling it out now
Do you really think im that stupid
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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 2:58 pm

there done
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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 2:58 pm

wait can I have chidori?
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Aburame Shikisha

Aburame Shikisha


Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2009-04-30

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:00 pm

I dun think so?
But I can teach you Raikiri when your approved
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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:03 pm

ok thx
well am i approved?
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Aburame Shikisha

Aburame Shikisha


Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2009-04-30

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:06 pm

I'm looking over the jutsu.

Your wind S-rank. Whats the risk for you?

Take out all of the genjutsu above C-rank. You'd need a specialty for it.

The Wind spiral, can it be defeated by fire-jutsu?

Spike Death, what are the spikes made of?
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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:11 pm

there fixed all of it
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Aburame Shikisha

Aburame Shikisha


Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2009-04-30

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:13 pm

Spirals OP. Give it a weakness or say that it'll take on any jutsu its rank and below.
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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:16 pm

ok
I have a idea
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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:16 pm

there
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Aburame Shikisha

Aburame Shikisha


Number of posts : 101
Registration date : 2009-04-30

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:17 pm

Kay. APPROVED
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Zane Flare
Anbu
Zane Flare


Number of posts : 45
Registration date : 2009-05-02

Character sheet
Chakra level:
Zanes application (Anbu) Left_bar_bleue100/100Zanes application (Anbu) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
demon: none

Zanes application (Anbu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Zanes application (Anbu)   Zanes application (Anbu) Icon_minitimeSat May 02, 2009 3:17 pm

sweet
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